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I'm thinking about 2 pieces I want to publish. The first one is one that I've been working on since last year, "a new life". My second piece is one that I wrote this year, called "kids now-a-days" this is just about how us kids don't shut up when our teachers are giving direction, and we don't know how to shut up.

http://www.32poems.com/

http://www.antithesiscommon.com/

right now the only thing i think i can chage would be the last 2 lines of this poem/thought.